Evaluation of Preliminary Task

From looking over my prelimanry I have began to understand what makes a good film and what doesn't. I think the success of this film was the varied camera shots we used however we still need to add a match on action shot to achieve the best we could. Another would be the filters we used over the top to cause affect with the spooky filter over the character standing in the road. The failures would be storyline I think, as for audience watching it it could be confusing of what the story line is and where it is going to go with the rest of the film. Another thing I would like to change is the dialogue as I would prefer to have none as it makes it more effective and as I am no actress feel like my role in it wasn't ver successful. Overall I do think there are things in my preliminary task that will need improving to have it full potential and show my media skills as I don't think it is suggesting that at the moment.